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Where is the GMC in the PLOT?

I am half way through a best selling novel and I must pause to reflect. I remember when I strictly read for enjoyment; when I did not care where the story went as long as I was entertained.

Apparently those days are over. When I crossed over that line from reader to writer, something happened to my reader radar. Not intentionally, but now I critique every book I read.

In this particular best seller, I would have quit reading eleven chapters ago if this was not a book club read that I need to discuss next month. Without naming the novel, it took until chapter thirteen to reveal the plot. For twelve chapters I kept trying to figure out why and where was this story going. There appeared to be no goal for the protagonists, no motivation to do anything and no conflict.

I must confess. I had to find out how this author got away with this gross error in our unwritten laws of writing. The answer is: wait for it, it is his fourth book. He obviously had a book deal. I can not imagine any new writer getting a chance in hell with a book that actually begins on chapter thirteen. True, the writer is witty, and outrageous enough to make for good conversation, but seriously? Thirteen chapters in?

The other thing I noticed were the forty five word sentences. What? So much for the test of a proper length of a sentence being if you can read it aloud without taking a breath.

This is one of those cases where once you are established you can break all the rules. For my fellow authors, has writing ruined you from strictly enjoying a book without picking it apart? Do rules broken jump off the page at you? Or am I perhaps just a bit jealous that others can get away with what I can not. I would love to hear from you.


There are two sides to every story. I like to write about the "other side." I like to challenge my readers to dig deep into their conscience and see life through someone else's eyes.

3 thoughts on “Where is the GMC in the PLOT?

  1. Not a writer, but I get it when I look at Art and say…. “what”…… I can do that, I have done that but I’m not in a fancy gallery…. how’d they get there… So, I do get it… and I’ve read books like that before too 🙂 Here’s wishing you hit it big with ALL your books you write.


    1. Thanks Deb. As an artist, are there rules you see broken by established artists that a novice could never get away with?


  2. Yep, this writer is a different reader from the one she was pre-writing days, and I’ve felt that annoyance when a big name writer doesn’t play the game properly, but I also like reading writers that break rules in a good way. I look forward to the day I am such a big name that I can do that, too!! 🙂


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